Kia Ora,
In writing we had to make up our own mythical creature, after watching the movie water horse we had some ideas what what to do. I wrote a three paragraph story not to long, that describes my own mythical creature. It is supposed to be like a dragon but with really soft fur and feathers, I’ll describe more in the story.
Story time
As the legendary creature walked among us, the smell of the. peach fur rushed up our nostrils. its silky scales that had gradients of colour was glimmering against the water. As its eyes shimmered and gleamed upon us.
It flew down and hovered over the crashing waves, and caught a long dark eel.The eel had slippery seaweed covering its scaly fish like body. Its blazed teeth chomped through the eel, you could tell it was starving. Its colour reminded me of the truffula tree in the lorax, the shades were beautiful, the mixture of the peach, yellow and orange blended well together. As it flew away, its cheeky grin smiled back at me, it was Like I got a wave from the king.
As it pranced over the waves, its glowing wings puffed out and it flew into the sun, It was like I was witnessing a angle. Most people would see this as a miracle, because there can only be one alive every 11 years. I got this opportunity and never forgot it.
The end
What do think? and what can I add?